Whee, as of a few nights ago we’re about half done! I mean, sure, it’s only a rough draft, and I need to touch up large sections of act III, but #YOLO right?
Did I do the hashtag right? I’m not really sure. Whatever you kids do these days.
At any rate, progress has been stellar. Or at least I think it’s been stellar. Apparently, screenwriting is a fast medium. That being said, the first round of edits is going to hurt. However, that’s future Johnathan’s problem, and I’ve long since learned how to pass the buck on to that poor shmuck.
In important, but pretty unrelated, news: We now have a real fake title! The current working title has leveled up from “______ Waltz” to “Secrets”. Isn’t that pretty.
One of the coolest things about this project thus far has been writing with a partner. It’s a new experience for me, and man is it great. Highly recommend, 10/10, five stars, would eat here again.
It’s amazing because, at least for this project, we cover each other’s holes pretty well. What kind of holes, you ask? Like, you know, half of the characters.
No, but seriously: all of my blog posts have been about Luna (or at least relating to Luna) because I don’t get Ivan in the slightest. I mean, I know he’s got a robotic arm and he’s a mechanical wizard and he’s living down a troubled past. But, I can’t get in his head. I struggle to write his lines and generally ask that Shannon go over and rewrite his dialogue for any scene I’ve written him in.
On the other hand, I see Luna in my head really well. I could probably write her in a rom com about online dating if I had to, because I can see all her personality and her dreams and her ambitions. These are independent from the setting, and even (to an extent) independent from what she physically looks like.
Shannon gets Ivan, but she doesn’t understand Luna. It’s gotten to the point where we just do cutouts for the other to come back and write the correct lines. So, in the rough draft, it isn’t uncommon to see:
Is everything to your liking?
Shall you join me for this dance?
I need to fill in Luna’s line here. I mean, it’s obvious that her line is just a sorta generic “yeppers!” but there are so many ways to write that.
Oh, by the way, Vlad (full name: Vladimir) is our villain. Yes, there is a scene where our female lead dances with the villain. No, you don’t know he’s the villain yet, unless we decide to tip the hand and make him look eeeeviiiiil.
Now, this quirk in writing gets even better when you think about it for a second. As you can see by my picture down there, I’m male (ladies). Shannon isn’t. So, our male lead writer is writing the female protagonist and our female lead writer is writing the male protagonist. Apparently, we’re confused.
So, you know, this’ll either be the least implicitly sexist thing ever or the most implicitly sexist thing ever. Could go either way, really. Obviously, Shannon and I aren’t trying to be awful, and she’s probably more in tune with this sort of thing than I am. I will say that Luna is based on an actual male friend of mine, which, depending on how you look at it, either helps or hurts my case. I don’t even know anymore.
I’m really bad with this.
At any rate, this is something fun to talk about but not something I’m thinking about at all when I write. Especially in ‘rough draft’ mode, the most important part is to get all the plot and character elements on the page, and roughly lined up in order. From here, editing, rewrites and feedback from beta readers can polish up the script to a mirror like shine that even Jezebel won’t hate me for.
They may still hate me anyway, but ya know… In this age of viral content, if I even get slammed it still counts as publicity!